Hey everybody, I figured that I would provide some excitement for all of you that are looking to kill some time.
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/i ... day-part-1
That is a link to a short story that I recently published for a small magazine. Cheers
Short story.
Awesome. Unfortunately I dont have any free time to kill atm. Will come back and read later.
DUDE! I just read it, it is fantastic!
that says a lot because I really don't read much (have a short attention span) - thanks for writing in such short paragraphs, its the only way I could make it through, lol. Long paragraphs kill me :)
Very creepy, very cool and surreal. Took me back to my own teenage/first time love affairs, you describe it beautifully. FUCK Mr Ford for seeling the drawings and not giving the kid any money lol (or did I read that wrong?) Now I'm even more paranoid of crows lol
Also, what is 'peanut butter and fluff'?
Great work man, super cool little yarn. My only disappointment is that I didn't get to read about him bangin Pauline in exquisite detail lol.
I like to write in screen-play format, it is a lot of fun. Did you write this with the whole story planned out, or did it evolve naturally? Is it based on any true events?
thanks tons for sharing, that's what the New F7 Crew is all about.
Hope you keep writing dude!!
that says a lot because I really don't read much (have a short attention span) - thanks for writing in such short paragraphs, its the only way I could make it through, lol. Long paragraphs kill me :)
Very creepy, very cool and surreal. Took me back to my own teenage/first time love affairs, you describe it beautifully. FUCK Mr Ford for seeling the drawings and not giving the kid any money lol (or did I read that wrong?) Now I'm even more paranoid of crows lol
Also, what is 'peanut butter and fluff'?
Great work man, super cool little yarn. My only disappointment is that I didn't get to read about him bangin Pauline in exquisite detail lol.
I like to write in screen-play format, it is a lot of fun. Did you write this with the whole story planned out, or did it evolve naturally? Is it based on any true events?
thanks tons for sharing, that's what the New F7 Crew is all about.
Hope you keep writing dude!!
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Thank you guys, so much. I am glad you enjoyed it mas! I had a blast writing it, my only regret is that I didn't turn it into a novel. And yes I should have wrote a scene of them having sloppy passionate sex, but I figured it would be more heart wrenching if it didn't happen. Glad to be here amongst such talented people. Enjoying this board alot and I look forward to become more active
I usually don't enjoy reading anything but comic books, but that was pretty good. You did a great job of creating imagery without being excessively detailed.
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Masato wrote:Also, what is 'peanut butter and fluff'?
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There is nothing like a peanut butter and fluff sandwhich. Thanks for the kind words empty, and thanks for the stomach rumblings as well. That picture is so fucking sexy!!!
Mas, if you have never had a pb and fluff sandwich then I implore you, go to your local supermarket, go down the pb& jelly aisle and buy some fluff.
Fluff is basically marshmallows whipped up to compliment peanut butter. In other words it is awesome.
Mas, if you have never had a pb and fluff sandwich then I implore you, go to your local supermarket, go down the pb& jelly aisle and buy some fluff.
Fluff is basically marshmallows whipped up to compliment peanut butter. In other words it is awesome.
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Masato wrote:DUDE! I just read it, it is fantastic!
that says a lot because I really don't read much (have a short attention span) - thanks for writing in such short paragraphs, its the only way I could make it through, lol. Long paragraphs kill me :)
Very creepy, very cool and surreal. Took me back to my own teenage/first time love affairs, you describe it beautifully. FUCK Mr Ford for seeling the drawings and not giving the kid any money lol (or did I read that wrong?) Now I'm even more paranoid of crows lol
Also, what is 'peanut butter and fluff'?
Great work man, super cool little yarn. My only disappointment is that I didn't get to read about him bangin Pauline in exquisite detail lol.
I like to write in screen-play format, it is a lot of fun. Did you write this with the whole story planned out, or did it evolve naturally? Is it based on any true events?
thanks tons for sharing, that's what the New F7 Crew is all about.
Hope you keep writing dude!!
you dont know what a fluffer nutter is?
peanut butter and marshmallow spread is probably the most delicious thing from my childhood......
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Nice work.
That sanduiche looks delicious
Nice work.
That sanduiche looks delicious
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TBH, when I started reading I immediately thought of "The Catcher in the Rye". The way the story starts...
Anywho, I ain't no story expert, but this was good. Very creative, imho.
Anywho, I ain't no story expert, but this was good. Very creative, imho.
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