I did 4 mins of comedy last week

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I did 4 mins of comedy last week

Postby greenseed » Sat Dec 16, 2017 4:02 am


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Postby Canuckster » Sat Dec 16, 2017 3:28 pm




























....actually I never watched it, but good job giving it a go. I've been wanting to try but just never seem to get the nerve
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Postby Edge Guerrero » Sat Dec 16, 2017 11:21 pm

- Good job! You should work as a manager for some wrestler!
- I rent this space for advertising

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Postby Masato » Mon Dec 18, 2017 1:22 am

Hey greenseed this is tremendous! Saw this post the other day it pumped me up but haven't had time to sit and watch properly...

weekend was pretty full and I like to get off the computer sometimes. Computer is actually a bit fucked right now tomorrow I may have to take it in so I may not be posting for a while but BIG PROPS for now and thanks tons for sharing/posting. BALLS, lol

I actually went to a comedy night in vic while I was visiting there, was only my second time watching live comedy it was pretty good. The host was a big 6-foot+ fat guy who I thought was very funny, maybe you can go check him out 1 night

I admire comics, gimme a day or two I will watch 100% and bounce any honest feedback that may be relevant

WAR greenseed, badass mofo

(canuckster can fight in cages but can't get up to tell jokes, lol :) greenseed to you work a lot writing material in advance?

Canuckster do you you have any material down somewhere?

its an interesting craft that's for sure. I think I would suck at it, lol

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Postby Canuckster » Mon Dec 18, 2017 4:07 am

i did in my last phone till i dropped it........:(
"The illusion of freedom will continue as long as it's profitable to continue. At the point where the illusion becomes too expensive to maintain, they will take down the scenery, and youll see the brick wall at the back of the theater."

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Postby Masato » Mon Dec 18, 2017 10:13 pm

Dude, just smoked a big spliff (yes I broke my Xmas resolution, lol) and watched your set

Legit LOL @ the lookies and toonies/easter egg bit, was dyin :D :D

Dude you are smooth!! So natural, very likeable and relaxed, I would guess the first bunch most comics are all nervous and awkward but I think people will dig your vibe right away

I also like how you're just totally yourself, not hyping up some character to try to make it funnier. That stuff can work but I don't think its good for longevity, always better to be yourself IMO and not just for comedy. Keep going man, you will kill :D

My only advice is maybe try to catch yourself not to the audience hang for TOO long whenever you take a creative pause... your pace is great it sets everything up nice/is working, but a few of the pauses was hangin just a second too long

Keep writing jokes man, you are really good at it I think you could build a killer set




Also boos to all you peeps lurkin here and not giving this man his props. This is the coolest thing any of have done in a while, lol

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Postby Masato » Mon Dec 18, 2017 10:19 pm

oh yeah who was the lady tagging on all your jokes? lol

Prime opportunity to test your heckler skills!! :D

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Postby greenseed » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:29 am

Masato wrote:Dude, just smoked a big spliff (yes I broke my Xmas resolution, lol) and watched your set

Legit LOL @ the lookies and toonies/easter egg bit, was dyin :D :D

Dude you are smooth!! So natural, very likeable and relaxed, I would guess the first bunch most comics are all nervous and awkward but I think people will dig your vibe right away

I also like how you're just totally yourself, not hyping up some character to try to make it funnier. That stuff can work but I don't think its good for longevity, always better to be yourself IMO and not just for comedy. Keep going man, you will kill :D

My only advice is maybe try to catch yourself not to the audience hang for TOO long whenever you take a creative pause... your pace is great it sets everything up nice/is working, but a few of the pauses was hangin just a second too long

Keep writing jokes man, you are really good at it I think you could build a killer set




Also boos to all you peeps lurkin here and not giving this man his props. This is the coolest thing any of have done in a while, lol


Thx man, i have a few more minutes already. I was onnly nervous right before like for 2 mins.

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Postby greenseed » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:30 am

Masato wrote:oh yeah who was the lady tagging on all your jokes? lol

Prime opportunity to test your heckler skills!! :D


One of my friends i think.. i'll have to listen again to see who.

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Postby greenseed » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:30 am

Edge Guerrero wrote:- Good job! You should work as a manager for some wrestler!


Thx edge. i could be your paul heyman


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